Look Before You Hop Part 8 (Finale)
Part 1 , Part 2 , Part 3 , Part 4 , Part 5 , Part 6 , Part 7 A couple quick notes: First, that's all for this series! Now that it's over, I just want to give a final reminder that I'm new to all this. If you write short stories of your own, please give me tips, criticisms, whatever you can think of, in the comments below. Any and all help is appreciated! Second, and last, there's something bugging me with the second half of this post. I'm not gonna spoil it, I wanna see how many of you notice so I can see if I'm just a perfectionist or if it's as obvious as I think it is.
Lol, loved the dynamic here.
ReplyDeleteHa! I love how he's slowly coming around.
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