Make Us Feel Young Again

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I was initially gonna post last Friday, but I wasn't quite sure how I wanted the story to go here. What're the possessers' relation to each other and their targets? How are the targets related, or are they at all? Expect to get less captions in the near future than I've been doing; three a week was fun for awhile, but I don't want to burn myself out on these. As always, let me know what you think! 

One more thing quick. Be honest, how many of you are here because of the link on Body Swap Fiction? I saw it the other day and thought that it'd definitely explain the higher-than-expected viewer counts on a new page.

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