Look Before You Hop Part 5

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I gotta say, after the way Part 4's image looked, I really like the way the above photo turned out. And in case you're curious, no, I'm not using myself in any posts.




Like I said on Part 4, parts 5-8 will be doubles like this. Next one's gonna be a bit... spicy. Nothing too serious, I'm not Body Swap Fiction (no offense M, you know I love your stuff!). You'll know what I mean when I put it up.

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  1. AlexHopper16April 19, 2022 at 8:38 PM

    Oooh, now I'm really intrigued where this all leads!
    Glad to see they started to use their hopper brain. lol

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    1. TomBSPApril 20, 2022 at 8:03 PM

      Ngl, this hopper's kind of a self-insert character in the respect that I wanted him to think like me. And since I'm about as smart as a baboon with half it's brain, it made sense that it'd take this long to come to this conclusion.

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    2. AlexHopper16April 20, 2022 at 11:19 PM

      I'm sure you're a smart cookie. lol
      I love body hopper content so it's fun to see how people use the power.

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    3. TomBSPApril 21, 2022 at 12:13 AM

      Personally I've always seen myself as more of a muffin. Dumb jokes aside, I'm glad you're still enjoying the series.

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    4. AlexHopper16April 21, 2022 at 10:29 AM

      Lol, I am.
      Part 6 was great.

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    5. TomBSPApril 21, 2022 at 11:15 AM

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    6. TomBSPApril 21, 2022 at 11:24 AM

      Parts 7 and 8 are pretty much done, I'm just going over them for typos, grammar errors, and seeing if I can reword any of the lines to come across better. 7 will likely be up tonight.
      Edit: scratch that, it's up now.

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