Ryan's New Trick - Prologue

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In case you can't tell, this'll be the beginning of a new series. Idk if I'll work on this exclusively until it's done or release entries gradually over the next few months. Whatever the case, I'm kind of excited about this one. I plan on making it longer than my previous one; it'll most likely be twelve parts (maybe not including this one, we'll see) as opposed to eight, with each part being two caps just like parts five-eight of Look Before You Hop were. 

As per usual, please let me know what you think. I'm still new, so any criticism you can give is appreciated. Trust me, you can't be more scrutinizing of my work than I am myself.

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  1. AlexHopper16May 17, 2022 at 2:13 PM

    A very interesting start.

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    1. TomBSPMay 19, 2022 at 11:16 PM

      I'm cautiously optimistic about this series. Idk why tbh, I just am.

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