Look Before You Hop Part 3
Screw it, I got bored, double-post this time. Part 1 , Part 2
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Look Before You Hop Part 8 (Finale)
Part 1 , Part 2 , Part 3 , Part 4 , Part 5 , Part 6 , Part 7 A couple quick notes: First, that's all for this series! Now that it's over, I just want to give a final reminder that I'm new to all this. If you write short stories of your own, please give me tips, criticisms, whatever you can think of, in the comments below. Any and all help is appreciated! Second, and last, there's something bugging me with the second half of this post. I'm not gonna spoil it, I wanna see how many of you notice so I can see if I'm just a perfectionist or if it's as obvious as I think it is.
Ryan's New Trick - Prologue
In case you can't tell, this'll be the beginning of a new series. Idk if I'll work on this exclusively until it's done or release entries gradually over the next few months. Whatever the case, I'm kind of excited about this one. I plan on making it longer than my previous one; it'll most likely be twelve parts (maybe not including this one, we'll see) as opposed to eight, with each part being two caps just like parts five-eight of Look Before You Hop were. As per usual, please let me know what you think. I'm still new, so any criticism you can give is appreciated. Trust me, you can't be more scrutinizing of my work than I am myself.
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